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Finding Neverlove

I have never loved you
I did not love you since the day we met
I did not love you the moment
I looked into your beautiful eyes.

I have never loved your soft voice
As it whispers my name in adoration
And I have never loved the look in your eyes
When you see me.

I don't love your hair
Or the way you look in the morning
Half asleep and vulnerable and shy
I do not love you.

I did not love you at the first touch
At the first kiss
I did not love you the first time
Or the second time
Or the last time
Not even then.

Listen to me carefully
I have never loved you
I will never love you
I will not love you until my very last breath
And beyond

I will not love you for all that you are
Nor accept you for all of your innocent flaws.

I cannot love you.



I have never loved you
Since the first time I set my eyes on you.
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The title is a play on 'Finding Neverland'.

Copyright Kathryn Jeanes © 2008 All rights reserved

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LOVELY :aww: ;p

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I'm pretty sure that...you don't love me in every way. I guess I finally understand now :)

Well done Kate. How in the world did you turn this non-poetry reading guy into a "I like to read your poetry" kind of guy?

Weird....
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wow wonderful...yet again...you never cease to amaze me

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Beautiful....Your saying I don't love you. And you list all of the things most people find love in.

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amazing piece

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Interesting take on it. almost sad, but shown nicely.

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hehe, great irony! :D

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Is this poem playing on an irony, stating the negative of the truth? Or is this poem meant to tell as sad truth?

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really excellent movie, that. never read the play (Peter Pan, that is), but i do so love the idea of Neverland.
After all, what do we have if not our dreams?

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Someday we'll find it
the rainbow connection
the lovers
the dreamers
and me.

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