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Still Being Continued by `Flutterings:iconFlutterings:



Still Being Continued

I keep faulting and defaulting
and I'm
Vaulting and revolting,
To the sound of music
I once used to play -

and I'm weeping
and not sleeping
Trying to chase away
that snarl,
the voice of treason -

I'm just doing and redoing,
and redoing,
I don't remember doing,
Things I redid
Yesterday-

So I keep saying and resaying,
Begging and beg-praying,
For an inch of space for me to spray on,
The words
I want to say -

I am aching and awakening,
Hope anaethatised
ANd my insomniatic raging,
Inconsequential aging,
In conscience I am fading -
but just don't reach for the gun.
©2009 `Flutterings
:iconflutterings:

Author's Comments

As a poem its done, as life - still to be continued.

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:iconhermionesclass101:
I absolutely adore the flow of this one.

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:iconmaggot34:
A very nicely written piece... :+fav:

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:iconladylincoln:
A truly beautiful poem here, dearheart.

It flows nicely, but also has a distinct edge to it that further adds to its overall appeal.

:heart:

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:iconflutterings:
thank you sweetie :)

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:icongeaannunziata:
YOU could dance to this.. maybe the tango ?

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